XwaynecoltX's movie Reviews on Newgrounds (2024)

2010-12-12 13:34:40

Bazaar and amusing

~~REVIEW~~
um ok so this was interesting and random i would have to say, now the fact that this "LOOPS" is a sign not that much effort was there but you did seem to put effort in other parts so i will let it slide there, but anyways the opening scene was um bazaar? lol it did give off a laugh or two, the battery scene was odd, then it just ended, but like i said it was funny and the little randomness, so as to make this better then what it is, you could add more randomness making it longer and even introducing other and new characters is one idea, But anyways a good flash you have here, very entertaining and did give me a laugh but could use a few fixes to improve on things and make it a much better flash then it already is, so give it a try, see better results. Hope to see some new stuff from you soon.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad new characters, more randomness, and new scenes aswell, Add a stop-Action code, it will stop the looping of the flash, aswell ad some play and replay buttons.

~~OVERALL~~
Random but pretty funny, opening scene is abit much but you know lol.

~X~

2010-12-12 13:33:21

Fun game, needs more

~~REVIEW~~
Now here is an older flash from way back when but still has some good quality to it, such as the "CODING" of the game, but i must say it did lack in more levels and such, as you did only have the three options of death unless i missed something, but still for the mostpart it was a good and simple game and made in a time of the sadam era which was amusing aswell, the effects were pretty good, and would have been nice as stated before to have more death options, or even have the game go into new scenes for new levels and ofcourse new death stuf, just a few ideas that would greatly improve on this, you did have something good here and its nobad at all even for today, so really awsome job here, i had lots of fun with this one. but anyways good luck on any new stuff you may make.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
well i did explain above on a few ideas on how to improve onto this, like, more "LEVELS" more "DEATH-OPTIONS" and so on, hope it helps for any improving on this nifty little game.

~~OVERALL~~
a fun game, it lacks more effort thouogh, i still had fun with it.

~X~

2010-12-12 13:31:44

Amusing too short though

~~REVIEW~~
Now here was one flash that was really short, maybe too short if you ask me, but anyways more about that later, the animation is actually entertaining just too short, you have some good characters, and somewhat animation like with the guy passing with the gun, also the movie just started no play button or anything, so you may want to add a preloader, also a stop-action code so it doesnt "LOOP" but so that it will start on the click of a play button, Now i must say i had fun with this as it was amusing and i like the three differant steps you showen and that was kinda funny, the characters were neat but why no mouths? another suggestion might be to have more realistic gun shots of something, and more smoke, but anyways good little short here could use some improving but overall i was entertained with the outcome.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
I would suggest adding a "PLAY" button and a "REPLAY" button, I would Also suggest to improve on the flash short you could add more shorts and put them all on one flash instead of just the one, but having alot in one flash would make it more entertaining, and make the flash longer with more to see

~~OVERALL~~
funny and amusing abit too short i thought.

~X~

2010-12-12 12:41:34

interesting

~~REVIEW~~
Hehe well this was interesting, the character was funny, the long "TEXT" i thought was abit much but kinda made it funny, so if theres a way you can shorten that but yet keep it amusing, this was an interesting flash and could be better but you have to put the effort fourth i like what you have sofar. anyways nice job here

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Less text at the start but keep it somewhat funny still,

~~OVERALL~~
Entertaining and amusing could still use abit more though

~X~

2010-12-12 12:40:27

Amusing, can be improved though.

~~REVIEW~~
LOL now i have to admit this was a pretty funny "COMIC-STYLE" Toon you had even liked how it was in the comic style, but before i get to that and the rest of it, i think the "BUTTONS" you have here should be better presented, they are better then most with the hover over color change but you still need to give it somewhat of a design with putting atleast a "PLAY" written on it somehow it would be nice, but anyways, as for the content of the flash it was funny and at times got to be abit much and thats something you actually may have to be concerned about for other people who may not like, but for me i found it somewhat funny, now as for the "ART" i think you could have done a better job say with the sticks you might get better results with more character designs and such, also some more use of color in the backround, there was a number of things, cant go into all of them but what i have suggested here and below are things that will really improve on this so give it some thought, so i found this to be amusing and somewhat funny, i did suggest a few fixes for its improvment but anyways good luck on your next entry.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
A few things as suggested are backround color and scenes, not just the white bland ones, have the characters more animated like a movie and not so much as a comic style, also wouldnt hurt to have play written on the buttons, Make Characters not the stick kind, while this does take more time and effort but it will make your flash better and with more details for the characters like color, hair clothing some facial detail, it will improve on this and your characters, something to think about for this or your next film, for improvment. So try and work on a few of the suggestions.

~~OVERALL~~
Overall it was an amusing flash but still has lots of room for improving, good luck.

~X~

2010-12-12 12:38:52

Day 52

~~REVIEW~~
heh ok so i reviewed four of these today and that song is just so repetitive, and needs a change of sorts, i do like how you added hitler with alot of differant {PROPS} and such, some animation would have been nice, even a colored rainbow would have been nice with this one, but you did have a nice backround so notbad at all.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Ad some more action in these with abit of animation, well alot of animation would be nice

~~OVERALL~~
Amusig but does need more to it

~X~

2010-12-12 12:37:13

entertaining

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was entertaining, the "ART" was actually pretty good, i thought this could use some subtitles though, and while it was entertaining some more added humor would be nice, it was amusing but other then that it was alright, just work on those few things and practice practice, it will all show up very well.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
a few things mentioned starting with some subtitles, and some more humor.

~~OVERALL~~
Amusing and entertaining but still needs more.

~X~

2010-12-12 12:32:55

another entertaining one

~~REVIEW~~
This was funny, i like the pink pokemon in this one, still as i said in many other ones you should have added more animation, something atleast in the backround, maybe the same pokemon jumping around or something but you need something in there, but other then that its pretty good i liked it.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
needs more activity as sugested above something in the backround with some animation maybe another or the same pokemon running around.

~~OVERALL~~
funny episode.

~X~

2010-12-12 12:26:22

Another entertaining adventure

~~REVIEW~~
Now with these pokemon ones they are a little better with the pokemon viduals, but again like the others but still like that there is more color in this one over the other ones, regardless i like them, anyways keep up the good work.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
ad some animation more then what you got going on and other scenes to go with.

~~OVERALL~~
Another entertaining hitler adventure, needs more though.

~X~

2010-12-11 11:14:07

Cute

~~REVIEW~~
Well this was more cute then anything else, kinda on the short end though, but you could improve on this like you could make it bounce in alot more areas more scene selections and overall differant places to give the flash itself a more longer and fuller feel, but i must say yyou made some nice animation with the art and especially the animation which i like so props to you just wish there was more there.

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
add more scenes let the character jump all around into new scenes and stuff

~~OVERALL~~
needs more scenes and more places to jump

~X~